Ere I Go — 5 Comments

  1. This is stunning! I love the lofty, poetic feeling this gives to an experience so many live (and struggle with)so often. These are wonderful lines: “when fervor newly found ingress / In hearts untested by lust’s impish play.” The one thought flows beautifully across them.
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  2. I can tell you’re a seasoned poet by the rhyming pairs you chose and your use of apostrophes. I always wondered why sonnets used such particular language. After writing one, I know that it’s all about the meter.

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