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  1. This was lovely, my dear. Much more heartfelt than I would expect from what I assume is a prompt – it’s the links in the last word of each line that make me think that? Do you mind sharing the prompt, or the inspiration? Such a clever idea, such emphasis – I really like this piece.

    (After clicking a few of those links) Is this a found poem? I do love the entire concept of that style, each part and participle. Taking the beautiful phrases that stick in one’s mind and reworking them to new purpose – could anything be more beautiful? Especially these days, when everything’s been said and done – since everything “new” is trite, why not braid the old with a fresh perspective?

    No matter whence this piece comes, Nat, it’s very well done.

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