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A Box of Photos — 20 Comments

  1. Wow! This was a terrific poem. Love the flow of it as well as the last lines that speak of a life so far from what had been imagined. My favorite line: “The language of the world which deals solely in broken dreams and dreams of the broken”
    JannaTWrites recently posted…First Snowy WinterMy Profile

  2. WOW !! The land of hibiscus….That plastic happiness….Foggy dream of the eternal….printed promises…broken dreams….. Can poetry be done better than this ? Totally Amazing !! The flow is magical. Love it ! xx
    Lala Rukh recently posted…The Red LetterMy Profile

  3. This is gorgeous, Natalie! I always love your poetry. There are so many great images in this, but I really love “If only dreams were guarantees you could redeem like coupons” – and I love the chill in those last few words.
    Suzanne recently posted…Writer’s BlockMy Profile

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