The Room at the End of the Hall — 29 Comments

  1. straight up torture- finish this right now! I must know more! This is going to torture me all night. NOT cool. But damn- great writing as usual!

  2. I’m curious if the “rodents” and “unusual” paragraph, while funny and realistic, was homage to Princess Bride?

    You creepy girl. A nice change from your everyday prose and subject matter. I really liked the set up. I’m okay with the conclusion, but like the other readers, want to know more. The revenge seemed kind of out of character for Robert until I reread the story, and now I like his motivation.

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