How it Ends
A flash sparked across the sky.
The ragged group looked up in disbelieving unison. It was the first man-made sound they’d heard in a month.
“What the…” Herman trailed off.
They stood dumbfounded for what seemed like eternity. Skeet, the first to tear his eyes away, looked around at the others. “Does anyone know what that was?”
They shook their heads.
Bob offered, “Flare?”
Gina said, “Naw, looked more like a rocket. They used to shoot them off down at the military base…before…” She trailed off, not even wanting to name what had happened.
They stood silent for a minute. Bob was the first to say it.
“We should follow it. It could be more survivors.”
Dylan shook his head, his long greasy hair swinging in emphasis. “Nuh-uh, no way. What if it’s a trap? Looters who want our guns? Or worse, someone with those little vials who wants to finish off the war with some mutant Anthrax? I don’t want to get into a gunfight with people who got rockets.”
“But what if it’s a signal? Maybe the military? We have to at least check it out!” a wide-eyed Kisha exclaimed. Everyone knew she was thinking of her missing husband. They shuffled their feet uncomfortably. They had all lost people during the epidemic, but Kisha seemed to think she was the only one suffering. They were getting a little tired of it.
Herman agreed, though, slowly nodding his head. “Kisha’s right. We don’t have to go in there all friendly-like and offer ’em our weapons or nothin’. We can sneak up on ’em. Do a little recon, then decide what to do.”
The group nodded, with the exception of Dylan, who pursed his lips and shook his head again. Knowing he was outvoted though, he kept silent.
“So, do we tear down camp then, load up the trucks?” Gina asked.
The group looked around them. None of them were attached to the place, a smattering of tents thrown up in the shadow of an abandoned warehouse. It had been isolated enough during the epidemic, but the worst of it was over. The radio had been silent for weeks.
Everyone decided they had been waiting a long enough time to know that no one was coming for them. The war was over. They had to move on some time.
Slowly, they started rounding up the gear, gathering supplies of canned food and bottled water.
Despite their certainty that they were doing the right thing, they couldn’t help but feel that this would be how it ends. None of them admitted this to each other, though. In a world with nothing but unanswered questions, the opportunity to solve at least one riddle proved too strong a temptation to resist.
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31 Comments
IASoupMama
Ooh! This is the start of a good apocalypse story — what happens next?
Natalie the Singingfool
Haha, I haven’t gotten that far yet… 😉
Jack
The way you used the picture at the end really added a lot to this. Very cool.
Natalie the Singingfool
Thanks! I don’t always include the pictures from the prompts, but this one needed to be there…
Ericamos
Yay!! Dystopian fiction! Poor, poor people. I want to know what it was!!
Natalie the Singingfool
Haha, not sure, but I kept thinking “mutant Anthrax” for some reason…
Sandra Crook
A good post-apocalyptic story with undertones with which the reader can identify. Nice work.
Natalie the Singingfool
Thank you, Sandra.
Stacie
This is like Walking Dead without the zombies. Loved it!
Natalie the Singingfool
Haha, thanks! Zombies aren’t the only way to end the world…lol.
Bee
I love dystopian fiction and want to know more!
Natalie the Singingfool
Thank you! I do, too. 🙂
Kristin
Last line perfection!
Natalie the Singingfool
Thanks! I had SO MUCH trouble with that last line….glad to know it works!
Suzanne
Like everyone else, I would love to know more – what happened and what happens next? Very well written – great dialogue and complex characters. Love it!
Natalie the Singingfool
Thank you! This was a tougher one, with so many characters in such a short space, but I’m glad it turned out okay!
deana
This is wonderful! I hope we get more of this.
Natalie the Singingfool
Thank you! This is one that could definitely continue…
Tamara
Great! Just great! 🙂
Natalie the Singingfool
Thank you, Tamara! I appreciate you reading. 🙂
Lori
Yep…1 gold star coming up!
Natalie the Singingfool
<3 :) Thank you!
Mod Mom Beyond IndieDom
Wow – great take on the prompt; really creative. That is a great closing line and I could hear it in the movie trailer. This is a movie I’d like to see.
Natalie the Singingfool
Thank you! It does seem like it’s pretty visual, huh?
Dayle Lynne
Oooh, I want more! I really hope it’s not the mutant anthrax!
Natalie the Singingfool
It probably is…lol. 😉
Esther
Ominous. It took away whatever romantic notion I might have about a post-apocalyptic society (ha ha). Well done.
Natalie the Singingfool
Lol, thanks! It’s hard to be romantic about smelly, unwashed people struggling to survive…
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