Fiction: The Jacket — 20 Comments

  1. Wow this was really sweet! Eloise totally endeared herself to me and Brian’s act of draping his jacket around her shoulders made me go “aww” 🙂

  2. What a lovely story of college going kids and their social life or lack of it :-)Loved the relaxed pace and the lines,”Smaller organelles of a larger nucleus. She didn’t particularly listen to any one discussion, just felt content at being a part of a whole, on the brink of possibility.” Wonderful!
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  3. Wow. I love everything about this. You painted such a wonderful scene of those promise-filled days of youth. And the subtle interaction with Brian was absolutely lovely. Beautifully done! 🙂
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  4. Wonderful. I love the rich detail of the characters and the settings. It felt real, like I was there. For me this story felt warm and comfortable like a summer breeze. I love the subtlety of the ending, of future promise. This story just makes me feel good.
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