On the Blue World — 20 Comments

  1. What a great story! You’re so good at hooking your readers right from the beginning. I was along for the ride and totally invested in your character. And now, I would love to know more about her universe.

  2. I too experimented with a new medium, but you did it much better. Do you care if I show this to my 12th graders when we get to the fantasy section of sci-fi? They will have to write from a prompt, but I can show them how even Francophiles can write in the fantasy style. Plus I can say you’re one of my blogging friends. They will be impressed.

    • I loved your story! I’m a little behind on my blog-reading, so I just saw it. But once again, OMG, of course you can share my story! That is like, the equivalent of being asked to star in a major motion picture (for me, anyway). Seriously, my head just grew two sizes…:)
      This actually was written from a prompt, too – if you click on the link at the bottom, it will take to the site where the prompt is posted.
      And *of course* Francophiles like fantasy. Don’t they perpetually live in one? 😉

  3. I love how you described the world around her so vividly. I definitely felt like I was there. And like other commenters before me, I want to know more of her story, her universe, and this chalice!

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